Talk to Me

Mar. 4th, 2017 09:45 am
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Author: [ profile] ruinsplume
Prompt Number: S3 ### submitted by [ profile] shiftylinguini
Kink Showcased: dirty talk/talking someone off
Rating: Explicit
Pairing(s): Teddy/James
Summary: James can’t get the words out. But Teddy can.
Warnings: Dirty talk, obviously! Click spoiler to read other enticements : light d/s, oral sex, rough oral sex, clothed sex, hair pulling, cuddling
Word Count: ~4000
Author's Notes: Thanks to [ profile] sabethea for the beta, and to [ profile] shiftylinguini for the prompt. And with thanks to both of you for the friendship, conversation, and contagious love of this pairing.

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Date: 2017-03-04 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Commented on AO3, but really this deserves another -- I am SO HAPPY you took this prompt, this fic is amazing and their dynamic is alsbdkshs EVERYTHING I love about this pairing! I am so happy you caught the love for this pairing, and thank YOU for the stimulating conversation, and now for Teddy's filthy, clever, beautiful, kind, stupidly hot mouth, and James's lack of words (his BROKEN FINGERS *dies* god what a perfect touch) and his oh so very relatable struggle with saying what he wants.


Date: 2017-03-06 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
“You want me to tell you how you want it?” Teddy continues, in a purr of a voice that runs as soothingly across James’s distress as a hand smoothing velvet. “Want me to say it for you?” Nom, nom, nom. Teddy is super hot. Oh, my... Just delish.

I love how Teddy's magic increases James's pleasure, and how Teddy describes James's cock is gorgeous, salivating. It being so difficult for James to speak his desire adds another layer of sexual tension.

This is such a tasty read. ♡

Date: 2017-03-08 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
>Teddy’s expression is neutral, but his clear brown eyes have lightened almost imperceptibly to hazel. No one else would have caught it. But James does. Fuck, yes: they’re on.

This is such a great interaction. Just a couple of sentences and we feel how deeply they know each other and see how well they work together.

>Always with a full dance card, always quick with a clever quip or a kind word where the rest of his family is tongue-tied, shy of the paparazzi that still dog them even now. But when it comes to this—to things involving his body in general, and sex in particular—he goes mute.

Love, love this detail!

This was absolutely wonderful, all the way through.

Date: 2017-03-09 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh fklgjlfk I love the way you wrote this. James is so precious, but so is Teddy, and the dynamic and interactions between them... GHHN. Wonderful! The dirty talk really works, and the how and why too. I love the magic used, and Teddy's hand in James' hair. Unff, that's such a kink of mine. I adore it. I like the security James feels with the blindfold on, too. That's an aspect of blindfolding I've been consider writing as well. That whole concept of feeling hidden away and safe with it on. I was staring at my screen when reading that. It made a lot of sense. And I love that ending.

The whole thing was sweet and hot. :D AAH!

Date: 2017-03-10 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ahhhh. This was hot hot hot omg <3 Teddie... the dirty talk. Merlin it was all perfect!! <3


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