Absolutely love the structure, the intensity you have presented in minimalist language. Love the way you present the kink—it's very sensual; not just hot, but carries so much emotions and histories as well. All the time I can see what is happening—you never lose sight of that—and it brings life, themoment to this story.
Awesomeness, nursedarry! Thanks for writing and sharing ♥
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Date: 2010-02-06 02:57 am (UTC)Awesomeness, nursedarry! Thanks for writing and sharing ♥