I hate time zone difference. Do you know how hard it was on me to wake up, see this posted and then have to take care of the laundry and all else that just had to be done, before I read this? Damn, I felt like all the chores took like trice as long to finish.
I loved the emotion of this fic. It's the strongest thing for me. All the kinks present are like a frame in which to showcase the strong, sometimes warring emotions of the characters. I wonder if I'm the only person who read about The Master and his slave without the need to assign names and faces to them (and what a brilliant way around your earlier troubles with the roles). They were. That's it as I see it. They see it like that. In that apartment, their one crossing point in reality whey are. They don't need to be something or someone that their wives, the public or whatever needs. They can simply be. Not be Draco and Harry. I don't think they want to be Draco and Harry there, because those two are so burdened that if the persons inside don't shed a bit of that burden they'll be crashed beneath.
Thanks for this.
The kinks themselves, were brilliant teasers. I like how you talked about them, but they kind of faded for me. It's their purpose that truly got me. I admit it's my first vomit fic, but I was fine with it. You did awesomely.
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2011-02-07 07:18 am (UTC)I loved the emotion of this fic. It's the strongest thing for me. All the kinks present are like a frame in which to showcase the strong, sometimes warring emotions of the characters. I wonder if I'm the only person who read about The Master and his slave without the need to assign names and faces to them (and what a brilliant way around your earlier troubles with the roles). They were. That's it as I see it. They see it like that. In that apartment, their one crossing point in reality whey are. They don't need to be something or someone that their wives, the public or whatever needs. They can simply be. Not be Draco and Harry. I don't think they want to be Draco and Harry there, because those two are so burdened that if the persons inside don't shed a bit of that burden they'll be crashed beneath.
Thanks for this.
The kinks themselves, were brilliant teasers. I like how you talked about them, but they kind of faded for me. It's their purpose that truly got me. I admit it's my first vomit fic, but I was fine with it. You did awesomely.