EEEEEEEEE. ASDFWE24SDF';ALDSKJF. This fic was so brilliant, I have no words. Just incoherent gibbering.
*takes deep breaths*
Okay, I will attempt to break down what I liked here.
1) The sex. Oh god, the sex. It was SO HOT. I loved the way it was all centered around Quidditch; I felt that was very nice. There's almost this sense of manipulation, but I don't think Oliver is doing it on purpose. I liked the way how it builds up, from the shower masturbation to fucking. I loved the dub-con; how Oliver seemed to care more for himself than for Harry. Which leads me to item number 2 ….
2) I loved how you characterized Oliver and Harry. Poor Oliver isn't really trying to manipulate Harry. He's just willing to get what he wants. He wants Harry. He wants the Quidditch Cup. It's part of his Gryffindor sensibilities to be brave and do risky things to get them. It just makes sense. In a gloriously porny way. Poor Harry's just so willing to have someone care for him that he's willing to let Oliver do, basically, whatever he wants. Lucky us :)
3) In the end, Oliver doesn't realize that anything's wrong. Because to him, nothing's wrong. I think that really, he was just having sex with Harry so that he could get the Quidditch Cup. He didn't really care for him. So for Oliver, in this case, it's pretty much a happy ending because he ends up getting what he wants. Harry, though—you have to feel sorry for him. He did everything for Oliver, and I have the feeling that he would've stayed with Oliver if Oliver had just been a bit nicer to him. He ends up giving Oliver what he wants. And then he goes off to lick his wounds.
I am pretty sure that I failed at coherency there, but tl;dr?
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*takes deep breaths*
Okay, I will attempt to break down what I liked here.
1) The sex. Oh god, the sex. It was SO HOT. I loved the way it was all centered around Quidditch; I felt that was very nice. There's almost this sense of manipulation, but I don't think Oliver is doing it on purpose. I liked the way how it builds up, from the shower masturbation to fucking. I loved the dub-con; how Oliver seemed to care more for himself than for Harry. Which leads me to item number
2 ….
2) I loved how you characterized Oliver and Harry. Poor Oliver isn't really trying to manipulate Harry. He's just willing to get what he wants. He wants Harry. He wants the Quidditch Cup. It's part of his Gryffindor sensibilities to be brave and do risky things to get them. It just makes sense. In a gloriously porny way. Poor Harry's just so willing to have someone care for him that he's willing to let Oliver do, basically, whatever he wants. Lucky us :)
3) In the end, Oliver doesn't realize that anything's wrong. Because to him, nothing's wrong. I think that really, he was just having sex with Harry so that he could get the Quidditch Cup. He didn't really care for him. So for Oliver, in this case, it's pretty much a happy ending because he ends up getting what he wants. Harry, though—you have to feel sorry for him. He did everything for Oliver, and I have the feeling that he would've stayed with Oliver if Oliver had just been a bit nicer to him. He ends up giving Oliver what he wants. And then he goes off to lick his wounds.
I am pretty sure that I failed at coherency there, but tl;dr?
YOU ROCK AND I LOVE YOU ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥