Wow, this was hot in an almost non-sexual way; there was no real sex and certainly no romance, yet it turned me on watching Harry's humiliation and orgasm denial. Oh! In two more months he will be begging to come, if released from the cock cage. I can also see him fully resenting it one moment, then being grateful for the discipline in the next.

Wonderful characterizations of both of them. Your Lucius was just how I imagine him from book 2 -- smug and on top of the world, arrogant and manipulative. Your Harry was strong in some ways and very vulnerable in others, a realistic match considering his background. Excellent work.