Oh, Birds, this was stellar! You have polished this up something beautiful - it's really diamond perfect now. Draco's creepiness and compassion are now in perfect balance. His own wanted and his love for Harry all entangled. I love how to managed to make the whole thing so precarious: Harry on the edge of ecstasy and anxiety at the same time and Draco riveted, but with his heart in his mouth as he fears he may have ruined everything. Perfect and delicious and filthy hot!