This was beyond hot! Your Draco and Albus were so sexy. I loved the alternating POVs and this line from Albus.
He feels like prey, spotted by the wolf in a fine three piece suit, exposed and vulnerable to slaughter. His weak legs tremble as alarms sound in his head.
That line really encompasses the hotness of the entire fic, how self-assured Draco is and certain this whole thing is a game, a predator stalking his prey. I also liked how there were hints that Albus had fancied Draco in the past and how Draco made Albus realize that unlike his family, he accepted his sexuality and impulses.
It really felt like there might be a repeat performance in the future. *hint hint* A sequel would be more than welcome. Hopefully, Scorpius won't find out about it thought. That might be a little uncomfortable or great potential for the sequel.
Anyway, great job. I don't read a lot of Draco/Albus fics, but this was amazing!
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He feels like prey, spotted by the wolf in a fine three piece suit, exposed and vulnerable to slaughter. His weak legs tremble as alarms sound in his head.
That line really encompasses the hotness of the entire fic, how self-assured Draco is and certain this whole thing is a game, a predator stalking his prey. I also liked how there were hints that Albus had fancied Draco in the past and how Draco made Albus realize that unlike his family, he accepted his sexuality and impulses.
It really felt like there might be a repeat performance in the future. *hint hint* A sequel would be more than welcome. Hopefully, Scorpius won't find out about it thought. That might be a little uncomfortable or great potential for the sequel.
Anyway, great job. I don't read a lot of Draco/Albus fics, but this was amazing!