http://shiftylinguini.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shiftylinguini.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpkinkfest 2017-02-26 02:56 pm (UTC)

Oh gosh, I really enjoyed this! I loved that Neville was getting a Devil's Snare tattoo, that seemed to wonderfully fitting, and tattoo artist Charlie was gorgeous! I liked the exploration of sexuality here, with Charlie being fascinated and not averse to touching, and liking Neville reactions, while at the same not wanting to kiss, and not really interested himself per se. That was handled very well, and I liked the way Neville just took the rebuffing of his kiss in stride! The ending was full of potential, and I like all the ways things could develop between them from here :D

Great job!

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