Whew! Unresolved emotional problems is right. That was harrowing! I was tense all the way through. Scorpius' voice was just so fucking hopeless and poignant and yet he submitted so it's in this weird place between consent and non-con that makes me all itchy.

That isn't to say I didn't like it! Forced fem is definitely a kink of mine (I wrote one for this fest as well) and you wrote it brilliantly. Harry was so commanding and pretty goddamn horrible, but Scorpius *could* have walked away... Damn, there I went talking about consent again.

Anyway, really beautiful, and I'd love to read anything more you write in this universe, if that's an option. Let me know if that happens! Really, great work.