I loved the opening, with Hermione as Draco dying with arousal. The plan, omg the plan, it was really entertaining, I liked reading it unfold and having the jumps in time, it worked well to my mind. :)
The sex was great, and Draco's comments at the end in the closet about it beating all his teenage fantasies, and then his teenage comment about noticing she is hot - so funny! That's my overall sentiment for this story, hilarious and hot, in the best mix and I love humour just as much as I love smut so yay! I mean,
Her mission was to seduce Malfoy!
Hahha, this is the best!
I do like the aspect of Draco being in love with future Hermione for ages, and then getting involved with same time track as him Hermione, and part of me wants to know more and see you write on this again, but I think the story works perfectly as is too.
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I loved the opening, with Hermione as Draco dying with arousal. The plan, omg the plan, it was really entertaining, I liked reading it unfold and having the jumps in time, it worked well to my mind. :)
The sex was great, and Draco's comments at the end in the closet about it beating all his teenage fantasies, and then his teenage comment about noticing she is hot - so funny! That's my overall sentiment for this story, hilarious and hot, in the best mix and I love humour just as much as I love smut so yay! I mean,
Her mission was to seduce Malfoy!
Hahha, this is the best!
I do like the aspect of Draco being in love with future Hermione for ages, and then getting involved with same time track as him Hermione, and part of me wants to know more and see you write on this again, but I think the story works perfectly as is too.
Great story! :D