Great story! I can't usually take Drarry!Draco seriously, because my Draco is straight (LOL), but I loved the relationship between him and Snape, and also between Snape and Lucius.
And I'm very tempted, now, to write Time after Time 2.0...
I agree with you about endings -- a little grit makes a pearl -- but the effect should be haunting, not disappointing, and I didn't feel confident about getting it on the right side of that very fine line. And, once I'd thought of making everything go back to canon, I knew I'd found the 'right' ending (for this story).
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And I'm very tempted, now, to write Time after Time 2.0...
I agree with you about endings -- a little grit makes a pearl -- but the effect should be haunting, not disappointing, and I didn't feel confident about getting it on the right side of that very fine line. And, once I'd thought of making everything go back to canon, I knew I'd found the 'right' ending (for this story).
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