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ext_71888 ([identity profile] koshweasley.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpkinkfest 2012-02-05 04:18 pm (UTC)

Liquid Fear

I do love when you pair these two. You've really created a sense of darkness and despair. Ron - good god - he held out so long and you've created his breaking point perfectly.

The imagery you paint is beautifully written.

He pulled at his wrists so that he staggered upright and then pushed him down on the floor amidst his own piss, and the drying piss of those that had gone before him.

Is it wrong I want to know who the others were before Ron? Or that I want to know what happens to Harry?

Although if I were Severus I wouldn't have gotten down in all that pee with Ron. lol

Another beautiful job my friend!

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