http://dornfelder.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dornfelder.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpkinkfest 2010-01-30 08:20 pm (UTC)

Great Story!
Your Draco and Harry were heartbreaking.
But I especially liked Ron/Hermione in this, and that you took your time to describe their relationship more detailed than the usual "they're married" which you get in three of four H/D stories. Hermione's reaction and thoughts when she heard Harry and Ron had been injured was beautifully done, and I loved it that you chose to take Ron's and Hermione's pov in the first part of the story. Both of them are totally IC.


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