I love first time fics and this one was so wonderfully written... I love how its not perfect, its nervous and fumbling and angsty... it just made it all the sexier and more sinful. I love how torn Harry is because he wants to do whats morally right but doesn't really have a choice but to be amoral. I love how Scorpius is also torn because he in some ways wants this, wants Harry to be his first but he doesn't actually want it in this way, he wants Harry to want him and Harry doesn't but he braves it just the same!! The end when Harry wants to Obliviate Scorpius in an effort to make it more right is sweet... I'm glad Scorpius stopped him though because then Harry would have two things to be guilty about. I wonder at what Rose will think when she hears of Scorpius' little adventure and if Harry might confess what he did to his wife or even Draco because of his guilt!! The plot is so fucked up and there are so many what ifs to it... that's the sign of a truly wonderful story!! It leave you wanting more... <3