Fic: Us and Them (Sirius Black/Severus Snape)

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

Title: Us and Them
Author: theimpossiblegl
Prompt Number: MG5 submitted by akatnamedeaster
Kink Showcased: medical kink
Rating: Explicit
Pairing(s): Sirius/Severus, James/Lily, Poppy Pomfrey/Original Female Healer
Summary: A potions 'accident' is what it takes to show two young men just what they really like.
Warnings: Medical play, enema play (without aftermath descriptions), prostate exam, injections, voyeurism, masturbation, oral sex, underage sex, golden showers, glove kink
Word Count: ~9200
Author's Notes: A big thank you to gelsey for being brave enough to beta. All remaining mistakes are mine. Kat, this isn’t the medical story you’ve always wanted – fickle muse has been a mess to work with. There’s some of your headcanon for the boys, some of mine, and some new things as well. But I hope it’s something you might like. *hugs*

Us and Them on A03

Comments

[starstruck1986.livejournal.com]

Another outing for enema play in this fest, and it was beautifully done. I loved how calculating Severus was, down to the ginger in the soap. I also loved him torturing Sirius by rubbing parts and making him urinate before release too.

Thank you. ❤

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad this hit all the happy spots for you. Thank goodness there's a fest where we can really let it all hang out ;)

[starstruck1986.livejournal.com]

Absolutely! <3

[akatnamedeaster.livejournal.com]

Well, this is incredibly filthy!

I'll be back with a proper comment later but I wanted to let you know that I saw it and thank you!

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

:) I just hope you like it, hon.

[akatnamedeaster.livejournal.com]

First off, thank you for being brave enough to take a shot at my prompt. I know medical kink/humiliation is one of those tough ones and the fact that you added even more kinks to it, is quite an accomplishment!

I love this bit:

“That’s better. I’m going to open up the valve now, and if you’re a good boy …” Severus faltered now. He was completely in unfamiliar territory, and he felt as though he was going to have to mime the dirty words he’d read in his father’s dirty magazines to get it right. “If you’re a good boy, you can suck me off, after.”

The hint of how out of his element Severus is but still game to play it up to the hilt is really refreshing. Usually, Severus is depicted as being sexually knowing and suave so seeing him being the teenaged boy with all the inexperience and gormlessness that entails is something I really enjoy.

Not that his inexperience stops him from going ahead and being super kinky with the added reward of getting his own back a bit. He can hardly be blamed for taking some liberties.

Thank you for the ending too. It's good to know that even after there's some snow on the roof (or arse as the case may be) that they're still game for a little bit of the kinky poke and tickle. I wouldn't imagine them any

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

I am so glad you liked! *wipes sweat from forehead*. It ended up more as 'kinky things that happened in the hospital wing' than real medical kink, but I'm glad it all worked. What better place to be kinky though, than in a place with loads of supplies (as well as a willing subject)?

Naive but still arrogant!Snape is a favorite idea of mine -- he'd never let a soul know that he's done no more than a one nighter with a friend, lol! All about keeping the appearances up.

[ladyofsd.livejournal.com]

This potion-accident!fic is wonderful! It's such a favourite trope of mine. I mean when Sirius proclaims his attraction and confesses everything under the sun. Get. Out! Lol! Awesomeness. All the side kinks add to the fun and hotness level of this fic.

The feels from the fluffy ending. *bawls* Beautiful. Brilliant job!

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you liked it! This was a ton of fun to write -- fun but not cracky (or, not too cracky lol). I couldn't help but add a touch of fluff. Those two bastards deserved so much better than what they got.

[mywitch.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness, that was some very dirtyhotandfun business indeed! I really liked the ending, although a strange part of me sort of wished Filch hadn't gone away on holiday... lol. Great stuff babe. You always amaze!

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

You read this??? My vanilla!witch read (and liked!) this dirty dirty dirty dirty kink!piece??? I am honored and touched, boo!! Thank you!!!!!

(I had an ending where Kreacher caught them and ran out screaming "Kreacher won't -- Kreacher won't!" but I just couldn't slide it in with a straight face)

[mywitch.livejournal.com]

I know, shocking! haha! I guess I'm always sitting around hoping that someone in a fic is going to get a thermometer up their bum at some point. LOL

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

Lol! And I'm always hoping someone is going to dress up in a lab coat and ... do naughty things to ... places. *blushes*

[mywitch.livejournal.com]

This is the real reason you became a nurse, isn't it?
I was premed for a while, but I kept throwing up, so back to art I went.

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

This is the real reason you became a nurse, isn't it?
Oh, well ... probably *laughs* I did fulfill a few naughty nurse fantasies for the ex-husband, down to a tiny outfit and all.

I was never pre-med. Nurses have all the fun with none of the malpractice insurance ;)

[articcat621.livejournal.com]

Ooooooo what a kinky and fun piece!! You definitely wrote this wonderfully (not quite sure I could pull it off lol). I loved your portrayal of Severus <3 and the ending had me smiling <3

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!