Wow, this was intense. I love how you've got Voldemort deconstructing the different layers of her fantasies. She wants to be punished -- but if she wants it, then it's not much of a punishment. And he knows that, he knows how to *really* break her down. When he's written as an ice-cold manipulator like this, it's easy to see why the DEs are wrapped around his finger.
Sex was secondary for him, compared to words and thoughts – she could sense his interest waning even as he buried himself inside her.
This is chillingly realistic. Rape isn't about lust, but about power, and you've captured that perfectly. Great story.
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Date: 2013-02-02 07:41 pm (UTC)Sex was secondary for him, compared to words and thoughts – she could sense his interest waning even as he buried himself inside her.
This is chillingly realistic. Rape isn't about lust, but about power, and you've captured that perfectly. Great story.