Oh my god, this is fantastic. The heat and lust and melancholy, with all the little details of their history slipped in, against the moment they find themselves in.
I really loved that idea of Sirius (most likely) having carved the runes from his wand onto his hands - like maybe he could channel his magic through them, perhaps, with his wand gone? Or maybe as a reminder, like Memento? That really caught me, loved that and it really does have so many possibilities - if you were to do another fic involving these two I'd love more about that.
How Remus and Sirius / Moony and Padfoot interact - their animal and human selves never really leaving them completely and the similarities and contrasts between both - is fascinating and really well done.
It's such a beautiful piece and oh that ending. God, my heart broke for them all over again. I just want them to ignore the owl and be happy in Haiti forever.
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Date: 2014-05-21 10:39 pm (UTC)I really loved that idea of Sirius (most likely) having carved the runes from his wand onto his hands - like maybe he could channel his magic through them, perhaps, with his wand gone? Or maybe as a reminder, like Memento? That really caught me, loved that and it really does have so many possibilities - if you were to do another fic involving these two I'd love more about that.
How Remus and Sirius / Moony and Padfoot interact - their animal and human selves never really leaving them completely and the similarities and contrasts between both - is fascinating and really well done.
It's such a beautiful piece and oh that ending. God, my heart broke for them all over again. I just want them to ignore the owl and be happy in Haiti forever.