So, first person POV can be really hit or miss for me, but I always love it when you do it, especially from Draco's POV. And I think that's because you capture Draco so perfectly, so exactly how I see them, that it's just always a pleasure to be completely submersed in his thoughts.
Oh and this was just fabulously filthy. The dirty talk was divine, the Veritaserum play was inspired, and seeing everything, seeing Harry through Draco's eyes was such a treat. Harry was so beautiful in his desire, and I am in love with, well, his honesty here. I mean, you did such a wonderful job having Harry spout of the sexy, dirty things, and then balancing that with the bits about the magical world that he almost spilled, and that whole part about him being a bit ashamed was perfect.
And then the ending! I think I had just assumed they were together, together. So of course you had to break my heart having Draco deceiving harry about his feelings to protect himself. But that last line from Harry just made everything better.
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Date: 2015-02-03 04:30 pm (UTC)So, first person POV can be really hit or miss for me, but I always love it when you do it, especially from Draco's POV. And I think that's because you capture Draco so perfectly, so exactly how I see them, that it's just always a pleasure to be completely submersed in his thoughts.
Oh and this was just fabulously filthy. The dirty talk was divine, the Veritaserum play was inspired, and seeing everything, seeing Harry through Draco's eyes was such a treat. Harry was so beautiful in his desire, and I am in love with, well, his honesty here. I mean, you did such a wonderful job having Harry spout of the sexy, dirty things, and then balancing that with the bits about the magical world that he almost spilled, and that whole part about him being a bit ashamed was perfect.
And then the ending! I think I had just assumed they were together, together. So of course you had to break my heart having Draco deceiving harry about his feelings to protect himself. But that last line from Harry just made everything better.
Such a wonderful way to start the day! :D