Yay, grace! Thank you so much. I wasn't convinced I nailed the Draco POV this time, but I was really writing against the clock here, so I'm glad it worked for you. I found the idea of using Veritaserum in a deviant way really intriguing, and although it proved a challenge to write, I wanted to give it a shot. Thanks for the reassurance that it was hot and Harry's shame didn't make it too much of a downer.
I worry about the ending... first I added bits and then I pruned a lot. Possibly too much. The back story is all there in my head but I'm not sure if all of it came across. I'm happy the last line satisfied you. You can thank lumosed_quill for that because I was totally just going to stomp on your heart and laugh. Sorry ;)
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Date: 2015-02-03 07:37 pm (UTC)I worry about the ending... first I added bits and then I pruned a lot. Possibly too much. The back story is all there in my head but I'm not sure if all of it came across. I'm happy the last line satisfied you. You can thank