Ooh, thank you! I'm glad you found the consensual humiliation worked. I felt I was walking a line between safe/dull and risky/ uncomfortable. I hoped to find the place marked HOT somewhere in the middle. It's so nice to have the dirty talk praised as this was a big challenge for me. I feel inhibited writing it and share a lot of Harry's discomfort, so this was kind of a trial by fire!
I'm so sorry that the part about them not being public with their relationship left you feeling unsatisfied. Again this was a tricky line to walk. I originally had much more about Draco's fears and why he felt the relationship was doomed if Harry told anyone. But on reviewing it this section seemed to drag the fic down. I edited, possibly too enthusiastically! I'll take another look at it and possibly tweak it. Thanks so much for this feedback and for leaving such a great comment!
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Date: 2015-02-03 08:49 pm (UTC)I'm so sorry that the part about them not being public with their relationship left you feeling unsatisfied. Again this was a tricky line to walk. I originally had much more about Draco's fears and why he felt the relationship was doomed if Harry told anyone. But on reviewing it this section seemed to drag the fic down. I edited, possibly too enthusiastically! I'll take another look at it and possibly tweak it. Thanks so much for this feedback and for leaving such a great comment!