I'm also copying and posting my AO3 comment here: Wow. That was unimaginably dark. What a horrible dystopian life they were forced into. For as horrible as it was, I couldn't look away and had to read the entire story. You wrote it in a very, very compelling manner. Great job!
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Date: 2015-02-10 03:08 am (UTC)Wow. That was unimaginably dark. What a horrible dystopian life they were forced into. For as horrible as it was, I couldn't look away and had to read the entire story. You wrote it in a very, very compelling manner. Great job!