I'm cross posting my comment here. Just saw your note about it being your first fest - man, I hope it's the first of many!
GOD YES! I adore this! I was so happy when I saw someone had taken this prompt, and this really is exactly what I was hoping for - fun, and filthy, and wrong, and just slightly preposterous :D
I love the way it escalated. I mean, really, it started pretty outrageously, but to end up with Draco wanking right there in front of Harry, under the table - I was like this: O__O. And you used my suggestions of just before a meeting, and in the showers! Yay! One of my favourite things was the little details, such as the smell of sex when Harry walked into the meeting room. It was all wonderfully vivid and sensual. It almost felt quite claustrophobic by the end in its intensity (in a good way).
Draco really was such a sly and dirty sod. I'm besotted with him. But then Harry outdid him! LOL. The under-invisibility-cloak sex was really a lovely kinky addition. I don't think I've ever read that before. I also loved the way Harry took control, teasing Malfoy, unsettling him, almost dominating him, but then chose to bottom when they had sex.
There were so many favourite parts, but I really did cherish the unwilling arousal dynamic. For instance Harry feeling violated - but also randy as hell. You really exploited this to give fabulous humour and heat to the whole fic.
What the hell did the git think he was playing at? Wanking in the office was not okay!
Hot though, his equally treacherous brain supplied.
HEE! This whole thing just delighted me. Thank you so much for treating us to this delicious and perverted tale. I'm over the moon about it.
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Date: 2015-02-10 09:38 pm (UTC)GOD YES! I adore this! I was so happy when I saw someone had taken this prompt, and this really is exactly what I was hoping for - fun, and filthy, and wrong, and just slightly preposterous :D
I love the way it escalated. I mean, really, it started pretty outrageously, but to end up with Draco wanking right there in front of Harry, under the table - I was like this: O__O. And you used my suggestions of just before a meeting, and in the showers! Yay! One of my favourite things was the little details, such as the smell of sex when Harry walked into the meeting room. It was all wonderfully vivid and sensual. It almost felt quite claustrophobic by the end in its intensity (in a good way).
Draco really was such a sly and dirty sod. I'm besotted with him. But then Harry outdid him! LOL. The under-invisibility-cloak sex was really a lovely kinky addition. I don't think I've ever read that before. I also loved the way Harry took control, teasing Malfoy, unsettling him, almost dominating him, but then chose to bottom when they had sex.
There were so many favourite parts, but I really did cherish the unwilling arousal dynamic. For instance Harry feeling violated - but also randy as hell. You really exploited this to give fabulous humour and heat to the whole fic.
What the hell did the git think he was playing at? Wanking in the office was not okay!
Hot though, his equally treacherous brain supplied.
HEE! This whole thing just delighted me. Thank you so much for treating us to this delicious and perverted tale. I'm over the moon about it.