Date: 2016-02-22 01:02 pm (UTC)
capitu: (sultry)
From: [personal profile] capitu
That was absolutely delicious, Birds. I love that you took the time to describe Draco's hands and gloves so very well. At moment I swear I could smell them! God. I'm never seeing gloves the same way again.

It's just so rich in imagery, and I love them all, those descriptions but there's this sequence I read and re read several times before moving on:

His eyes are smoky-grey, like fumes curling up from a potion. He holds the glove ready, his fingers just waiting to slip inside. He speaks quietly. “You know what to do.”

… But really it's because I want to hear him say it.

“On your knees,” he tells me, softly, almost lovingly, and my legs fold and obey of their own accord.


GOOD GOD, OKAY? *shivers*

I just love the delicious build up, and the way Draco is, everything about him is deadly sexy, and the way Harry reacts, it's every bit as delicious.

And this ending scene:

“Listen.” My voice sounds sort of gruff. “Don't leave it so long next time.”

Smoking hot, just like everything about this story. I love this ending.

And the art! [livejournal.com profile] shiftylinguini, that was perfect. You captured Harry just right, his eyes, this rapture-like feeling about him as he's about to kiss and lick and suck those gloves. That beautiful gloved hand ready, waiting to be worshiped. It's perfection.
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