Oh good green grapes, I don't even know where to begin. What a magnificent fic, first of all. The switching point of view really makes the story, and I adore the mood you set. UM, and the delicious dubcon is everything to me. It's brilliantly executed and fkghklhg the way Draco doesn't ask for it. Oh my god, why don't you simply kill me right now?
I like how there's some backstory too, even if just a little bit. The emotions are there and it's so wrong and so right and omg how he pushes him into saying yes is soooo amazingly wrong and perfect. Albus wants it but he shouldn't, and.... and...!
The way you describe things is so sexy and captivating, and I really like how you got the emotions across. I swear I could feel the tension and then the relief when it finally broke, and the sex was hot. Gosh, that ending toooo. I don't know if dfkhgdhldf I can tell you how much I loved this.
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Date: 2017-02-20 09:54 am (UTC)I like how there's some backstory too, even if just a little bit. The emotions are there and it's so wrong and so right and omg how he pushes him into saying yes is soooo amazingly wrong and perfect. Albus wants it but he shouldn't, and.... and...!
The way you describe things is so sexy and captivating, and I really like how you got the emotions across. I swear I could feel the tension and then the relief when it finally broke, and the sex was hot. Gosh, that ending toooo. I don't know if dfkhgdhldf I can tell you how much I loved this.