FIC: She keeps me warm (Millicent Bulstrode/Pansy Parkinson, NC-17)

[ravenclawsquill]

Title: She keeps me warm
Author: ravenclawsquill (ravenclawsdiadem)
Prompt number: F6 (submitted by leontinabowie)
Kink showcased: Cunnilingus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Millicent Bulstrode/Pansy Parkinson
Summary: There’s nothing dainty about this; nothing polite or proper. She grinds against my face so hard it hurts, desperately seeking friction, always craving that little bit more than I’m willing to give.
Warnings/kink: Explicit sexual content, cunnilingus, fingering, masturbation, eighth year, mild infidelity (Pansy/Draco are semi-dating), first person POV, lesbian!Millie, bi!Pansy
Word count: 3,171
Author’s notes: I'd like to say a huge thank you to my tremendous beta, kittyaugust, whose brilliant suggestions improved this fic immeasurably.

Read the fic at AO3.

Comments

[leontinabowie.livejournal.com]

This was so hot! Wow!

I adore Millicent as a character, and I love that you've written Millicent unapologetically butch. Same as Millicent, I have no problem with women who have long hair and wear makeup but it's so nice to see a woman with short hair and thick thighs.

I loved the voice you gave Millicent too, and how she was Slytherin to the core yet not a one-dimensional character. Pansy was also so very in-character and it was especially fun to see her through Millicent's eyes. And the way Millicent pushed Pansy, wanting nothing more than to give her pleasure but also not pushing her too far...and the imagery and descriptions in the smut scene were so sexy!

A really amazing story, thank you! ♥

[ravenclawsquill]

I've replied properly on AO3, but once again, thank you for your lovely comment! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the fic!

[sabethea.livejournal.com]

Oh, very much YES. All the yes.

Absolutely beautiful, my lovely. I love the absolute gorgeous butchness of Millie - she sounds so fucking hot it's untrue. And the way she plays Pansy - and Pansy plays her - is so bloody Slytherin.

Then the sex. Oh gods, so good. All the nipple play and making Pansy wait for it and ask for it. And then being so slow about getting there, making her wait. And then getting off in her own bed afterwards, and them both challenging each other silently before Pansy gives in.

Just all of it. SO good to have lovely, wonderful femslash. Thank you!

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you so much, Sab!

Millie/Pansy is my very favourite femslash pairing, and a lot of that is to do with their sheer Slytherin-ness, so I'm really glad you liked that aspect of the fic.

And I absolutely agree that Millie is damn hot – she's butch and she owns it!

I'm so glad you liked the smut!

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

This was hot! I'm so glad to see more Millicent in the world, and you've written her so well! Bravo!!

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you very much!

There is definitely not enough Millicent in fanfic, so I'm delighted to have thrown in my contribution!

[http://users.livejournal.com/_melodic_/]

Wow this was smoking hot! Usually I don't go for femslash but your writing is always so tantalizing and I just couldn't keep away.

THANK GOODNESS!

I loved Millicent's voice, the first person POV was perfect for this. Pansy's desperation, Millicent's slow teasing which lead to her just diving in and giving Pansy exactly what she wanted. UNF, then ending it with that pillow humping. Oh goodness yes! I think you've turned me onto femslash--I really do.

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so good.

[ravenclawsquill]

Ahhhhh Mel!!!

I'm so glad you gave it a go! :D And beyond pleased that you liked it!

Millie's POV was great fun to write, so it's so nice to see that you felt it worked.

You know what, I have never seen pillow humping in a fic before. Ever. So I just had to put it in this one, because that's just not good enough!

And is a fic even a fic if it doesn't feature desperation in some form or other? I'm not sure it is! XD

I think you've turned me onto femslash--I really do.

\o/ <-- That's me flailing, in case you couldn't tell!

[digthewriter]

This is ridiculously good, and has left me so breathless! Amazing job.

[ravenclawsquill]

I'm so glad you liked it!

Breathless is always the goal, so I'm delighted to have achieved that! :D

[shiftylinguini.livejournal.com]

Ahhh, I left my love for this on Ao3 yesterday (because I was super fat and got to that link before it was posted on here LOL) but this amazing, and so hot and perfect, and I loved every word.

<333

[ravenclawsquill]

I've replied properly on AO3 – your comment had me full-on flailing!

I can't believe how quickly you found it! XD I'm so glad you did: I was a little nervous about posting my first bit of smutty femslash, and your comment put me at ease.

[shiftylinguini.livejournal.com]

Oh gosh, well I sort of subscribed to you on Ao3? Lmao, so I saw it post, and read an commented, and then checked the comm and realised I was a bit...premature? *snorting forever*

I was a little nervous about posting my first bit of smutty femslash, and your comment put me at ease.

Oh gosh, it was SO good!!! I'm still all a-flutter :D

[kittyaugust.livejournal.com]

I know I've already told you how much I love this but oh my gosh. It's still so so good on the fourth read. I think I'm a little bit in love with this kind of Millie too. Pansy didn't stand a chance. <3

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you so much! It really is a thousand times better thanks to your excellent beta suggestions.

And no, Pansy really didn't stand a chance at all!

[ladyofsd.livejournal.com]

“Do you want more?” I whisper against her lips.

I pinch her nipples harder when she fails to answer, relishing the choked moan which escapes her. “I can give you more.”

“Fucking hell, Millie…”

Titillating! Omg! Wet knickers accomplished. :D The descriptions are scrumptious and the smut smouldering. Fantastic! :D

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!

[carpemermaid.livejournal.com]

Holy shit, darling, I knew this would be good when I saw the summary, but adhfjkdslahfldjksahfkjdsha *is dead and ruined and gurgly* I loved it!!!!

[ravenclawsquill]

\o/!!! Thank you ever so much! Your comment on AO3 has me flailing, and this one made me laugh out loud!

I'm delighted to have made you "dead and ruined and gurgly"!

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

Oh holy grapes, this is why I need to read femslash more often. This is gold. Brilliant characterizations, wonderfully written, and absolutely delicious. Millicent was amazing and gorgeous, and Pansy so sexy seen through her eyes. The mood you set – unff. The jokes! The inside joke that turned into something more. Yeessss. All the teasing, too. Oh good god, how drawn out and delicious the smut was. dfgdgh :D YES, this is everything to me. I'm completely ruined!

Why do I basically only read slash again? Fucking hell, I'm mad. Thank you for this masterpiece.

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you so much for this brilliant comment!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed the characterisations; I had such fun developing Millie and Pansy (especially butch, badass, not-afraid-to-go-after-what-she-wants Millie!). And I'm thrilled you liked the smut! I wanted to write some smutty femslash which isn't too romantic - I tried to give it the same edge I tend to see (and write) in slash fics.

Why do I basically only read slash again? - Maybe because it's damn hard to find explicit femslash? It's a permanent struggle to find good, smutty femslash!

[kiertorata.livejournal.com]

OMG this was amazing! My first time reading a Millie/Pansy fic and I loved it. I'm really intrigued by your Millie.

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked Millie; she was such fun to write.

[articcat621.livejournal.com]

So hot!!! Really well done <3

[ravenclawsquill]

Thank you!