Wow - I almost didn't read this as the kink concept didn't appeal to me, but I'm so glad I decided 'to skim' - which turned into being fully absorbed into it - because this story feels very special. I really like the way you got across hints as to why Harry felt the way he did about his weight and food without being heavy handed about it, ditto the delicate treatment you gave as to Draco's own motivations and reactions to Harry. Draco's non-judgemental tenderness and acceptance, even arousal, was very satisfying to read. The last paragraph was amazing and I'm full of admiration and jealousy for thinking up such great concepts. This wasn't exactly a 'comfortable' story to read, but it was very, very good!
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Date: 2010-03-06 12:15 pm (UTC)