onerottenpeach.livejournal.com ([identity profile] onerottenpeach.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpkinkfest2011-01-30 03:25 am

ART: Guileless

Title: Guileless
Artist: onerottenpeach
Prompt Number:  #480 submitted by [livejournal.com profile] bluemoon02 
Kink Showcased: Chan (16-ish)
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Lupin/Hermione
Warnings: chan/underage, age difference
Medium: Digital
Artist's Notes: Sorry this turned out so tame! I may end up doing a continuation to post at the end of the kinkfest that shows the kink some more/is at least R rated. 3 hours late because I totally forgot to post :B Also, fair warning, I drew Lupin how I always imagined him rather than movie-accurate.

[identity profile] reynardo.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I do like! Am looking forward to the next part.

[identity profile] vane-nt.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
You don't need to be sorry for anything IMHO. The kink is very well represented! *__* I love your Hermione, love your Remus and love their kisses. :-)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
This is PERFECT!

[identity profile] mijeli.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa, I love this. The first panel is beautifully drawn, and your sparse use of colour works just right. (I wish it was a bit bigger, so I could see more detail :3)
I agree with vane_nt, the kink comes across wonderfully - a "harmless" scene with intense subtext. Great job!

[identity profile] naturegirlrocks.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Hermione is so cute in that last of her face!

[identity profile] valinorean.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 12:59 pm (UTC)(link)
it's adorable! And I like your Lupin. stubble! ♥

[identity profile] starstruck1986.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ I love your Lupin!

Very subtle way of putting the kink across. Not everything has to be heart-stoppingly NC-17!
ext_512358: man peering around a book at two half-naked women (princesspea)

[identity profile] starduchess.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful and sweet. I like Lupin's shocked look in the fourth panel.

Nicely drawn all around.

[identity profile] teas-me.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! I love your Lupin with is stubble, and your Hermione is so pretty and youthful in the third panel, but in the last one there's just something a little more about her that is - I can't describe it, except to say YES!

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
This is absolutely gorgeous! I love your Hermione.

[identity profile] winterstorrm.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
This is adorable.
ext_71888: (Whoohoo)

Guileless

[identity profile] koshweasley.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! Love their expressions.

[identity profile] sbrande.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
This is done REALLY well.

Thanks for sharing your brilliance.

love Sonia :)

[identity profile] gryff-slytherin.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I like it!

[identity profile] meglw0228.livejournal.com 2011-01-30 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you capture the prompt perfectly! So sweet!

Wonderful job!

(Anonymous) 2011-01-30 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Like others, I am glad that you chose originality over movie!canon accuracy! Not that I don't love Thewlis, I do – it's just much more interesting to see Remus (and Hermione) how you imagine them. Good work! :) ~ Trixie Locket

[personal profile] besamislabios 2011-01-30 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I love this, it's so beautiful and sweet. :)
vaysh: (Default)

re: Guileless

[personal profile] vaysh 2011-01-30 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
GThis is so beautifully drawn, full of innocence, and a sense that Hermione wants to make up for Harry's dismissal of Remus by kissing him, and then this surprising surge of passion from Remus. You captured the prompt wonderfully, all in blues. I don't even think it needs an R-ish continuation. There's so much here!
rebecca_selene: (Hexxus)

[personal profile] rebecca_selene 2011-01-31 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
I love your Hermione. The bottom middle frame of the second row (*fails at terminology*)? LOVE.

[identity profile] letmypidgeonsgo.livejournal.com 2011-01-31 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
LOVE this!

[identity profile] mollyssister.livejournal.com 2011-01-31 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Hermione looks so young! Naughty. I am on pins and needles for the next naked part. ((bounces))

[identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com 2011-01-31 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. Beautiful. Amazing work.

[identity profile] snatch-patch.livejournal.com 2011-02-01 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
This flows so well. The blue looks so great!! Please to be continuing ASAP.

[identity profile] annastronaut.livejournal.com 2011-02-01 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
That's too adorable!

[identity profile] megacurious.livejournal.com 2011-02-01 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
Love this, and I love your Lupin. He is close to how I imagine him too. Love the scruffy facial hair look

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2011-02-05 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh!!! I love this! Wonderfully depicted.

[identity profile] luvscharlie.livejournal.com 2011-02-07 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is gorgeousl. I particularly love their faces and how you've done it in blue and set such a great contrast.

Love it!

[identity profile] daiseechain.livejournal.com 2011-02-07 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
So sweet! Love the colouring you chose.