I am so thrilled you liked it! (It's been so wrong since I've written and I was afraid I was really out of practice.) I see a lot more assertive Draco and I wanted to explore it on the other end. I did wonder if the prompt had been intended for it to be the other way around, but I thought this was more fun.
I had initially had dialogue in the first part...but it was incredibly wooden and it was mostly me trying to go "hey, I'd like a premise for how this happened, even though it's a kink-fest.". And yeah, I've always been prone to tense issues, and I've been trying to work that out. Thanks for taking the time to point things out! (I'm gonna go look for typos now too though, I thought I got everything.)
But yes, this was fun to write and I am glad you enjoyed!
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Date: 2011-03-01 08:36 pm (UTC)I had initially had dialogue in the first part...but it was incredibly wooden and it was mostly me trying to go "hey, I'd like a premise for how this happened, even though it's a kink-fest.". And yeah, I've always been prone to tense issues, and I've been trying to work that out. Thanks for taking the time to point things out! (I'm gonna go look for typos now too though, I thought I got everything.)
But yes, this was fun to write and I am glad you enjoyed!