This was really... hot. Lol. I adore a jealous!Malfoy, and Scorpius really captured that in a sensible manner. He didn't storm around causing a scene; he handled it the way a Malfoy would, I believe. He was subtle and conniving, just the way I like my Malfoys. :)
Al was... well, adorable. He's oblivious, which I like. I also love that it was his idea to go to yoga. I don't know why, but it almost fits to the way I characterize him.
I really appreciated the pictures you linked. I was having a hard time visualizing what was going on, so the pictures of the positions were really helpful.
Hm. As for the dubcon, I liked that. I like to imagine that Scorpius and Al have a history with BDSM of any sort, simply because of the fact that Scorpius planned this and did it without talking to Al about it. (I feel like jumping this type of bondage on someone who only has vanilla-y inclinations would be terrible, and can't imagine Scorpius doing that to Al, since he obviously cares for Al.) Anyway, in my mind, Scorpius and Al already have a safe word, and it made the read much more comfortable and enjoyable for me.
Well! Great job! You really showcased the kink in an amazing way. I really enjoyed this read.
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Date: 2010-01-29 11:03 am (UTC)Al was... well, adorable. He's oblivious, which I like. I also love that it was his idea to go to yoga. I don't know why, but it almost fits to the way I characterize him.
I really appreciated the pictures you linked. I was having a hard time visualizing what was going on, so the pictures of the positions were really helpful.
Hm. As for the dubcon, I liked that. I like to imagine that Scorpius and Al have a history with BDSM of any sort, simply because of the fact that Scorpius planned this and did it without talking to Al about it. (I feel like jumping this type of bondage on someone who only has vanilla-y inclinations would be terrible, and can't imagine Scorpius doing that to Al, since he obviously cares for Al.) Anyway, in my mind, Scorpius and Al already have a safe word, and it made the read much more comfortable and enjoyable for me.
Well! Great job! You really showcased the kink in an amazing way. I really enjoyed this read.