I'm so excited you saw a balance / connection between the sex and the violence. I thought that punch was important, meant overstepping a border just as much (probably more) than any of the other touches they shared. I just.. love it when they're violent ^_~
I love everything you noticed and pointed out to me. It means so much to receive a comment like that, that makes you go back and reconsider what you wrote, why you wrote it. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
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Date: 2012-02-01 12:48 am (UTC)I love everything you noticed and pointed out to me. It means so much to receive a comment like that, that makes you go back and reconsider what you wrote, why you wrote it. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!