I enjoyed this very much. I have surprised myself with how much I like cross-dressing stories for their fetishization of the feminine. This takes that fetish to another level.
Also, the line that got me was the last five words here: "As I eat her, I take her hand and place it on the back of my head, holding it there so it won’t fall back onto the bed, lax as a slit wrist."
A perfect miniturization of the death, violence and passivity that pervades the story.
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Date: 2012-03-14 05:24 am (UTC)Also, the line that got me was the last five words here:
"As I eat her, I take her hand and place it on the back of my head, holding it there so it won’t fall back onto the bed, lax as a slit wrist."
A perfect miniturization of the death, violence and passivity that pervades the story.