In the hands of another author, I don't think this would have worked as well as it did, but you wrote everyone so believably and true to character. I loved reading the scenes between Scorpius and James, they worked as a good set up for Scorpius's feelings/reaction to Harry. And the sex--it was perfect for the story, you could really feel the characters' emotions and vulnerability shining through. I haven't read very many Harry/Scorpius fics but this one definitely stands out to me.
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Date: 2012-02-19 06:07 pm (UTC)