FIC: An Unplanned Lesson (NC-17)

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Title: An Unplanned Lesson
Author: MyFirstistheFourth
Prompt: #153 submitted by lady_of_clunn
Kink Showcased: Omegaverse
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry Potter/Severus Snape
Summary: Harry is stuck in detention with Snape, Again. But this time is different, something doesn't feel right... or maybe something feels very right. Surely Snape is to blame? It just has to be his fault, Harry's never felt this way before. And just what in bloody hell is an Omega?! And why does that make Snape so very happy?
Warnings/Content Notes: dub-con, first heat, first-time, come-play, light bondage, fingering
Word Count: 12,540
Author's Notes: This story encapsulates a lot of firsts for me. It is my first fest of any kind. It is my first Harry Potter story, my very first attempt writing in the fandom. I can only hope I have done justice to the prompt as well as the fandom. Many, many thanks to my tireless beta IrelandSpades for proofing, editing, and suggesting (especially the mirror!). Even in a fandom new to both of us her help was a godsend as always. I also enlisted some additional eyes from the Harry Potter writing pool to give me some insight as well. So gracious thanks and gratitude to Errand of Mercy, Neelix Sshg, and OneCelestialBeing for additional editing, Brit-picking, opinions and insights. I hope everyone is pleased with the results. Thank you so much for your time reading, any feedback is always appreciated. Enjoy!


( An Unplanned Lesson )

Comments

HAWT=much more than HOT

[sp-owl.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this very much. I love a hot Snape dirty-talking to a needy Harry. I also love alpha/omega dynamics. Every time I thought it was as hot as it was going to get, something more would pop up. I loved Harry sitting on Snape backwards, watching in the mirror! I loved his red, swollen nipples and Snape pinching them! The whole description of what Harry could see in the mirror! All the knotting! And the DIRTY TALK! all so hot hot hot hot HOT! <3

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Hi. I will be adding this link to this week's SSHP Prophet, but I need a clarification.
The header says detention but doesn't mention underaged or chan, which is important for our Australian subscribers, so could you clarify? Thank you.

[nia_kantorka]

Oh, I loved this effing hot story. And it counts even more because I don't read so much a/b/o fics. I'm very happy I gave it a go because it would have been my lost.
Your Snape was such a bastard at first but intruiging nonetheless. I could relate to Harry and just had to give in ;p. The mirror scene- wonderful! *fans herself*
I'm sure they'll have a very good time when they'll meet again behind closed doors. :D
Thank you very much, MA!

[lady-of-clunn.livejournal.com]

Again, thank you soooo much!

There is not enough omegaverse in HP and even less GOOD omegaverse!

I love how Snape didn't lose control, wanting to give Harry a choice and giving himself the chance to be chosen this time.

Would love to see how this works out for them... *hint, hint*

[shaded-paradox.livejournal.com]

Wow. This. is. hot! I just love the dirty talk, the knot sex, and the whole alpha and omega concept. And this is your first HP fic? It's wonderfully written ^_^