FIC: An Unplanned Lesson (NC-17)

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Title: An Unplanned Lesson
Author: MyFirstistheFourth
Prompt: #153 submitted by lady_of_clunn
Kink Showcased: Omegaverse
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry Potter/Severus Snape
Summary: Harry is stuck in detention with Snape, Again. But this time is different, something doesn't feel right... or maybe something feels very right. Surely Snape is to blame? It just has to be his fault, Harry's never felt this way before. And just what in bloody hell is an Omega?! And why does that make Snape so very happy?
Warnings/Content Notes: dub-con, first heat, first-time, come-play, light bondage, fingering
Word Count: 12,540
Author's Notes: This story encapsulates a lot of firsts for me. It is my first fest of any kind. It is my first Harry Potter story, my very first attempt writing in the fandom. I can only hope I have done justice to the prompt as well as the fandom. Many, many thanks to my tireless beta IrelandSpades for proofing, editing, and suggesting (especially the mirror!). Even in a fandom new to both of us her help was a godsend as always. I also enlisted some additional eyes from the Harry Potter writing pool to give me some insight as well. So gracious thanks and gratitude to Errand of Mercy, Neelix Sshg, and OneCelestialBeing for additional editing, Brit-picking, opinions and insights. I hope everyone is pleased with the results. Thank you so much for your time reading, any feedback is always appreciated. Enjoy!


( An Unplanned Lesson )

Comments

HAWT=much more than HOT

[sp-owl.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this very much. I love a hot Snape dirty-talking to a needy Harry. I also love alpha/omega dynamics. Every time I thought it was as hot as it was going to get, something more would pop up. I loved Harry sitting on Snape backwards, watching in the mirror! I loved his red, swollen nipples and Snape pinching them! The whole description of what Harry could see in the mirror! All the knotting! And the DIRTY TALK! all so hot hot hot hot HOT! <3

Re: HAWT=much more than HOT

[(Anonymous)]

Thank you so much!! Can't tell you how happy that makes me! I've been so nervous about this first HP fic but the plot bunnies are already breeding again!! Thank you for commenting, I truly appreciate it! MyFirstistheFourth

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Hi. I will be adding this link to this week's SSHP Prophet, but I need a clarification.
The header says detention but doesn't mention underaged or chan, which is important for our Australian subscribers, so could you clarify? Thank you.

Thanks and Clarification

[(Anonymous)]

Hello! Being recc'd Anywhere is exciting so Thank You. This is Not intended as underage or chan at all. I meant to tag it or put in notes to consider it an AU where Voldemort died when Harry was a baby and life went on from there. These events would occur during the seventh year of school as Alphas/Omegas commonly present once they come of age. So Harry would have been 17 at the start of the school year and presented sometime thereafter. So of age for wizards anyway. I hope that helps?. I'm not sure about changing the tags at this point. I can do it easily enough on my AO3 post but not so easily here. I can check with the mods if it is a problem for you though. Again, I Greatly appreciate the comments and the rec!! MyFirstistheFourth

[nia_kantorka]

Oh, I loved this effing hot story. And it counts even more because I don't read so much a/b/o fics. I'm very happy I gave it a go because it would have been my lost.
Your Snape was such a bastard at first but intruiging nonetheless. I could relate to Harry and just had to give in ;p. The mirror scene- wonderful! *fans herself*
I'm sure they'll have a very good time when they'll meet again behind closed doors. :D
Thank you very much, MA!

Glad you Gave it a Try!!

[(Anonymous)]

Thank you so much for the comments!! I love to hear from people who enjoy my stories! And I truly am glad you gave it a shot, especially if it isn't your usual kink!! This fic is for the fest and the prompt but the plot bunnies in my head are already contemplating what will happen when they meet up for Harry's next heat....or what may happen a little further down the road. :-D Thanks Again! MyFirstistheFourth

[lady-of-clunn.livejournal.com]

Again, thank you soooo much!

There is not enough omegaverse in HP and even less GOOD omegaverse!

I love how Snape didn't lose control, wanting to give Harry a choice and giving himself the chance to be chosen this time.

Would love to see how this works out for them... *hint, hint*

Thank You!

[(Anonymous)]

You are so very welcome! As much as I worried over it, I truly enjoyed writing this story. And you are right there really isn't as much Omegaverse in HP, unlike other fandoms where there is tons.

Snickers! I Love Snape as an Alpha. I think the biggest risk he took in the Whole story was offering himself to Harry for his next heat. This first time they couldn't really control, it just happened. But the next time, Harry has to willingly choose to come to Severus.

And he will. *wink-wink*

Thank you so much for your comments! :-D MyFirstistheFourth

[shaded-paradox.livejournal.com]

Wow. This. is. hot! I just love the dirty talk, the knot sex, and the whole alpha and omega concept. And this is your first HP fic? It's wonderfully written ^_^

Thank You and Sorry! :-/

[myfirstisfourth.livejournal.com]

I honestly have no idea How I did not see this comment until now! I mean I didn't see a notice or anything. I apologize for that because I Always reply to comments. I really appreciate folks who read one of my stories and then take the time to say something about it. Thank you so much for the great comment! :) This Was indeed my very first HP fic and still a big favorite. The fandom has been very good to me since this too; I am up to eight works now including the sequel to this one. LOL I am so glad you enjoyed it! Just ashamed you went unanswered this long. Hope to see you around again! :-D