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Title: Orthrus
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lady_of_clunn
Prompt Number: 43 submitted by [livejournal.com profile] softobsidian74
Kink Showcased: Bestiality for a partner’s pleasure
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Narcissa/Orthrus, background Lucius/Narcissa
Summary: Sometimes, men turn to beasts.
Warnings: Bestiality, dub-con
Word Count: 1406
Author's Notes: For Sony with love - you asked for it, girl! Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] dynonugget for the beta, I know this one was not easy on you! And to nastygrl, who made me crawl into Narcissa’s head.


Even though the room resembled the dungeons far beneath the manor, it was not. A tall window was witness to it, spells keeping the biting icy winter wind outside; there was no glass to reflect the torch light in the room and hide the dark, snow covered landscape outside from sight. Situated in the oldest part of the manor, built at a time in which Muggles used oil-drenched animal skin to protect from the cold but allow in light, these rooms were now used for alchemy, rituals and other activities not intended for visitors to see.

Rough, unevenly hewn stone made up the thick walls, and large, flat stone slabs covered the floor. There were no sparkling chandeliers, just torches, stone and wood. In this raw, elemental part of the house the magic flowed easily; strong, clean.

It was the only place she ever felt close to her husband.

He had not allowed her to move as of yet, but she knew he was still there, behind her, watching from the large, high backed armchair.

“Take your position.”

Relieved, Narcissa turned to the wide, tapestry-covered sofa in front of the broad hearth, when her husband spoke up again.

“On the floor. Do not believe I have forgotten that you deigned to take matters in your own hands the last time.”

She dared to turn around to him and look into his eyes, pleading.

“Lucius, please! I...”

The nearly inconceivable tightening of his hands around the snake headed cane silenced her much more effectively than any command could. In defeat, she closed her eyes and hung her head.

At least there was the soft lambskin to protect her knees on the hard stone floor. The fire in the hearth was bright and strong, and depending on the position of the spectator, it would either provide excellent lighting or a bright backdrop for her dark silhouette.

He never let her see him, when they were in this room. He never let her see his pleasure.

The door opened quietly, and she heard nails clicking against the floor tiles. By the long, leisurely steps the animal was taking, Narcissa knew it was one of the giant breeds.

There were excited sounds and yipping as Lucius petted the dog, praising the ‘good boy’. A pang of sadness and jealousy filled her chest. It had been a long time since his voice had been as gentle when directed at her. The dog was ordered to sit; she heard a swishing sound from his tail as it swept across the floor.

She was startled when the cool, polished wood of his cane slid between her thighs to exert pressure, first to one and then the other, wordlessly communicating to her that she was to spread her knees apart. He tapped against her inner thigh once more before he was satisfied.

The time of the month was well-chosen, just before the onset of her cycle. She could feel her nether lips separating and knew that the creature could smell her scent. The swishing sound grew more agitated, and the nails of his front paws clicked on the stone as he shifted as if fighting the urge to run to her and bury his snout in her sex.

Released by an unspoken command, the dog hurried across the expanse of the floor and sniffed her pussy and apex of her legs. She tensed and took deep breaths through her nose to calm herself. This was not Hamlet, Lucius’ proud and enthusiastic Great Dane or her gentle and affectionate Pyrenean, Blaireau. No, this was the Orthrus, Titan, Lucius’ massive two-headed beast.

Both of his heads explored her core, licking and sniffing simultaneously. Her labia swelled and opened even further, inviting the searching snouts. She knew by now how a dogs’ tongue was muscular and strong and covered with countless tiny buds, making contact intense with its roughness.

Nothing had prepared her for the double assault of her clit and lips. The strong muscles worked merciless over her most sensitive parts, a snout buried in her pussy, the other pushing to find space as well. Her head jerked up in surprise and she drew a shuddering, helpless breath.

Her fingers curled into the soft wool under her hands. Her mother had taken her aside the day before her wedding and had explained to her the significance of the vows she would be taking.

To obey and honour.

She had explained to her the duty to endure. Had explained how some men turned to beasts.

Now Narcissa knew this to be true in more ways than one.

Just as she thought her arms would no longer support her weight and buckle beneath her, she heard the gentle command.

“Good boy. Fine boy.”

The animal lifted its head from her overflowing sex and waited excitedly for its Master’s command that it knew was coming.

“Mount.”

Sharp claws were on her back, scratching trails of fire into her delicate skin at her sides in the urgent effort to find the right position on her back.

He covered her, all heaviness and smooth fur, twin breaths on her neck and cheek.

The Orthrus was as large as the Great Dane, if not larger. There was a panicked moment in which her instincts told her to raise up on her knees to throw him off, and she started struggling to close her legs when she felt the pressure of the cane on her shoulder, reminding her of her place.

“Down.”

It could have been just as much a command for the dog as for her, but the pressure of the wood on her neck made it clear who was being addressed.

Lucius had not permitted her to lie down; she had angered him when she had dared to reach between her body and the Dane’s, preventing the swelling knot at the base of his cock to be pushed inside of her, binding her to the beast. Although the weight on her back was already straining her body, she was grateful not to have to look into two sets of eyes or bare her vulnerable throat to two sets of sharp teeth and powerful jaws had she been on her back.

Titan held her tightly, his fur rough and smooth, caressing and abrading her skin. He pumped his large, slippery cock inside of her, bumping and stabbing her sensitised, erogenous flesh. He set a furious pace, sliding against her, a rough grinding deep inside her very human body.

She could already feel the swelling of the knot rubbing her responsive lips.

There would be no forgiveness for another digression from her side; she knew what Lucius wanted from her.

Narcissa relaxed as best she could, opening her thighs further for the aroused creature bent over her.

The knot was pressed inside. So warm. So full. Blood was rushing to the base of his cock that had stopped moving entirely, pressing against her, stretching her sensitive opening.

Pleasure was overriding her fear.

The Orthrus held her in place, pressing, stretching, pushing against her clit from the inside.

She did not know what the animal had done, but the pressure mounted to unbearable heights. Then, her arms were no longer supporting her and the creature’s weight, and she fell to the ground. Delirious with lust that would not stop crashing over her, as he filled her with his warm seed, so much warmer than her own body.

Cool hands stroked her forehead and cheeks, freeing her from the plastered strands of hair sticking to her sweaty skin.

The dog rested inside her, securely locked by the swollen base of his cock.

“You have done well.”

The creature whimpered; but this time, Narcissa realised with triumph, the words of praise were meant for her.

“I love to see you when he holds you down for me.”

He placed his fingers under her chin, tilting her gaze up to meet his eyes.

“You are very beautiful like this. In this ultimate bondage.

Two bodies.

Tied to each other.

By each other.”

He then tenderly placed her head back on her shaking underarms and retreated to his place on the nearby sofa to release his own straining erection. The scene in front of him illuminated by the blazing fire.

Titan pushed against the sprawled figure underneath him, ensuring that the pressure against the soft female tissue never ceased, making Narcissa cry out in pleasure once more.


Mods: I leave the pairing up to you...

Date: 2010-02-07 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keppiehed.livejournal.com
Wow, that was fearlessly written! Way to embrace the prompt, I am in full admiration of you. I mean, we have all danced around the bestiality kink here, what with squids, puffs and snakes (myself included), but this one OWNS it fully. I mean, it out there, no denying that. So, big cheers to you for that, I love something new. Rather, new to me. I like the point of view you chose, the explanation without rationalization. It was not burdensome, but sad and struck a chord of realism. Well written, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2010-02-07 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] literaryspell.livejournal.com
Wow, this was amazing. I have a bit of a bestiality kink but it so very rarely done well. This was amazingly written and showcased. I especially loved Lucius, so imperious and cruel. And Narcissa doing anything to please him, just as she was taught. Trying so hard to be a good, dutiful wife. Wow, again. Really well done, hun.

Date: 2010-02-08 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] literaryspell.livejournal.com
Oh, yay! I hope it helped. Yes, I totally adored this even though I don't usually read het anymore... um, does this count as het? Anyway, wonderful writing.

Date: 2010-02-07 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dynonugget.livejournal.com
So brave of you to write this so boldly! Your writing, as always, is top notch!!

Date: 2010-02-07 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starstruck1986.livejournal.com
This is brilliant, with the prompt bravely attacked and no stone left unturned. The building of the anticipation is what gives it it's power, and Narcissa's willingness to give her husband what he wants. And the descriptions of her physical sensations were what steamed it up to make this so beautifully well done!

Date: 2010-02-07 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I'm sorry that I'm such a wuss and am commenting anonymously. :/ But I'm not really comfortable with linking my username to how freaking turned on I am by this. It took me completely by surprise, to say the least! So thank you for broadening my horizon (to put it mildly *g*).

Date: 2010-02-07 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inspired-ideas.livejournal.com
Take a bow. You did an amazing job with a very challenging kink.

Date: 2010-02-07 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kayoko.livejournal.com
The thing that hit me the most about this story is the sense of realism. There's nothing silly or fluffy about it. I still haven't figured out how Lucius actually feels about it. Does he do this for his own twisted pleasure or does he do it because he loves her in his own twisted way? *ponders*

Gawd, the beast part was hot as embarrassing as it is to admit it!

Date: 2010-02-08 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tarnishedangel2.livejournal.com
Hi, LadyofClunn

I found this fic by following the link that Soft put on her LJ to it, and I must say I found it interesting. I'll admit that I enjoy Animagus fics, and Titan lapping her was HOT and YUMMY sigh inducing. *runs off to hide somewhere for admitting that kink* LOL!!! It reminded me of the first Animagus fic I read. It was a Dramione fic called "Creature Comforts" (I think it was on Coloured Grey). Draco (as a ferret) lapped Hermione, and I realized that this was a kink of mine. I was startled by this realization too...heehee.

Edit: I realize this isn't an Animagus, but a true beastiality fic. I read over my review, and I thought that I should clarify that point.

The actual canine/human sex registered on my squick radar, but it wasn't a high register. I think because I was impressed with your research. You mentioned a Great Pyrenees (one of my favorite large breed dogs). You also have knowledge of how dogs actually mate. I've read a few Animagus fics with Sirius where the fic is spoiled for me because of the lack of canine reproductive knowledge. That wasn't the case here. Additionally, this fic hit the humiliation kink button which is one of my larger kinks and most people won't go there. And, lastly, neither Titan nor Lucius hurt Narcissa. It wasn't cruelty...just kinky pleasure. ;) Cruelty is what sends my squick meter off the charts.

NICE job, Lady!!! And, THANKS for allowing me to experience something different. Soft, THANKS for asking for this!!! And, Dyno, CONGRATS for going beyond your limits to beta it. :)

Take care!!!

Tarnished
Edited Date: 2010-02-08 01:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-08 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tarnishedangel2.livejournal.com
Hi again,

Great Pyrenees are beautiful dogs, and smart ones. I have a friend who has a couple of them. They are wonderful herding dogs for both cattle and sheep.

Yes, I noticed that you used the dog from Greek mythology. I thought that was a nice touch too, and pulling his name from Greek myth, and making an Orthrus a breed was very creative. I like that you used Orthrus instead of Cerberus since I think more people are familiar with the 3 headed dog than the 2 headed brother. Like I said before, your research for this was impeccable. :)

Take care!!!

Tarnished

Date: 2010-02-08 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winnett.livejournal.com
Wow. Very well done. Others have said how well you did more eloquently, so I'll leave you with a high five. ;)

Date: 2010-02-09 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mollyssister.livejournal.com
I love the idea of older parts of the manor only used for rituals and pure magic. I would imagine the elves fear to tread there. WAy to run with the prompt!

Date: 2010-02-09 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Oh my. This is one of those fics that makes me blush at how much I liked it. You did an amazing job with a difficult prompt. Kudos!

Date: 2010-02-11 12:03 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] musyc
Ooooof, so not my kink at all, but very, very well written.

Date: 2010-02-13 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com
This is so my kink, and I've never seen it done like this. Really well done. congrats.

Date: 2010-02-14 04:26 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I'm commenting anonymously because I'm a coward, but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate you writing this fic. Of all the prompts, this was the one I was hoping to see written the most and you really did it justice.

Date: 2010-02-19 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emansil-08.livejournal.com
Unusually hot and sexy, and kinky as everything. Reminds me of the book "the Happy Hooker", which came out some time in the late 60's early 70's. Yep, dog sex was there.

Great job with the prompt and very brave of you.

Date: 2010-02-21 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tray-la-la.livejournal.com
i have to echo everyone else's comments - this was bravely and unflinchingly done. beautifully written, to boot. brava!

Date: 2013-09-17 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kat-ania.livejournal.com
Dammit. Fuck. Either I didn't have bestiality as a kink before reading this or it was hidden enough that I had no idea of it. This is really really great! and I don't know what to do with myself now.

Date: 2014-05-04 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexicyn.livejournal.com
Thank you for writing and sharing this!

It as...

Yeah. Thank you. :)

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