FIC: Death Grip (James Sirius/Albus Severus; James Sirius/Teddy)

[amorette.livejournal.com]

Title: Death Grip
Author: amorette
Prompt Number: Self Prompt
Kink Showcased: Male Chastity Device
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): James/Al, Teddy/James
Summary: Death Grip Syndrome: When a bloke masturbates so much and so hard that his dick loses its sensitivity, and it becomes incredibly difficult to come anymore. — James is mortified by his problem, and even moreso when it seems like the only person who can help him solve it is his younger brother, Al. Neither of them could have predicted where this road would lead them.
Warnings/Kinks: brothercest, wanking, D/s dynamics, dominant!Al, heavy dub-con, chastity device/cock cage, orgasm denial and ruined orgasms, prostate milking, face fucking, discipline, conditioning, humiliation, sexual slavery, anal plug
Word Count: ~15,300
Author’s Note: I had so much fun writing this fic. Thank you oceaxe and _melodic_ for betaing. This story fulfills a couple of prompts I have been meaning to fill: A while ago gracerene prompted me with James Sirius Potter + Facefucking—I hope you enjoy this! Also from an AO3 prompt generator: Schmoopy Breakfast Facefucking.


DEATH GRIP

Comments

[gracerene]

We're, so excited for this!! Very sad that I still have a full day of work ahead of me before I will be able to read! Be back after I read!

[nia_kantorka]

I left a worshipful comment on ao3, but this deserves all the praise. Gosh, lady, I had to stop myself from drooling all over my mobile. ;P
The chastity device in action was beautiful, but even more impressive was the whole conditioning of James here. His trusting soul was one of stunning beauty and I think Teddy and Al are lucky blokes here. Thanks for sharing!

[amorette.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you so much for reading and for both lovely comments ♥ I'm so happy you enjoyed this :)

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

Omgherd, I've gotten about half in on my lunch break and I fucking hate having to go back to work! This is awesome! More to come.

[amorette.livejournal.com]

Haha yay ♥

[carpemermaid.livejournal.com]

ashdfklsahflasdh *very melty and dead puddle of goo* hhhnnnngggggggg *g*

[shiftylinguini.livejournal.com]

omgosh, this is SO hot, and all three of them are gorgeous and amazing, and James, argh! Love him so much here, and his problem (fuck, that was stupidly hot!). Albus helping him was so good, and then the Teddy ending, ahhhh that made me so happy. Love this so much!

[sabethea.livejournal.com]

Oh gods, such a Slytherin!Al with his own motivation and yet a good heart. And a trusting, conditioned-to-obedience-and-loving-it!James. Then, just for the joy of it, you added a slightly-guilty-but-I'm-still-going-to-do-it!Teddy. Poor James, in the early scenes. I really felt for his mortification. But this was such a great story.

[kikimay]

WOW, oh wow! This is soooo kinky and hot. I don't even care that much about next-gen kids? But I liked this one! Al is such a pervy clever dom, but I love Jamie most of all <333

[http://users.livejournal.com/_melodic_/]

UNF YES!

This is even more decadent and delicious the second time around.

The starting wank scene is just, EVERYTHING and how it leads to Al cornering James like that, pushing and prodding until he gets what he wants.

And James, so desperate and willing to try anything, I love the build up and slow, sensual slide into James obeying and loving it.

And then that ending with Teddy. Phew, just divine!!!

My mouth is watering all over again!

[ladyofsd.livejournal.com]

Can't go wrong with a wank circle. And making it a competition is even better. Lol!

When Teddy's voice is described as soothing, I think how it must be similar to Remus's voice, and I get the feels. Awkward time to get the feels, but there ya go. :D

It was like their twinness gave them a psychic cock connection. Awesome line. :D

And OMG the conditioning! Al is so insidious, but it's So freaking hot! I also Love how hands-free orgasms is featured.

Phew! Then Teddy enters the picture. Ugh! *drool*

Fantastic work!

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

God Lord this was hot!
And Al is a little Slytherin devil, isn't he? So clever and insidious the way he reeled James in.
And then Teddy! OMG.
And in the end, a very happy James.
Nicely done, hon! Very hot. :)

[felixfvlicis]

This was so clever! I adored Slytherin!Al -- my goodness.
Then you give me James + Teddy . . . my heart.

I really enjoyed reading this.

♥

[lefthandofglory.livejournal.com]

So excellent! I loved the tables being turned on a cocky James. Really enjoyed this.

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

This is absolutely terrific and wonderfully delicious. I was hooked from the first scene, because, wow, that was fun. Poor James, though. But, gosh, what a good problem to have, because look at how it worked out. Ugh, Albus is so scheming and helpful here, and I adore it. Then there all all these moment with Teddy, and it makes me melt. The ending is fantastic and I love how Teddy's sort of guilt-happy and hesitant at first. But who can resist that? Smoking hot, and the ending was very sweet.

[articcat621.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness, sweetie, you always write the kinkiest, hottest stuff ever!! I don't even know where to begin to be honest? The circle jerk? Dom Albus? Orgasm denial? *flails* all so good!! Teddy was just the icing on the cake for this fic... just well done!! <3