FIC: Can't Get You Out of My Head

[femmequixotic]

Title: Can't Get You Out of My Head
Author: femmequixotic
Prompt Number: MG24 submitted by geneva2010
Kink Showcased: Nudity
Rating: Oh, so goddamn explicit, fuck me
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry
Contains: Aurors, voyeurism, dirty talk, light D/S overtones, switching, public sex, shower sex, blow jobs, masturbation in shower, frottage, power imbalance, smoking
Summary: After he sees Harry Potter naked in the Auror showers once, Draco can't stop thinking about him.
Word Count: 14,624
Author's Notes: geneva2010, I took your prompt of nudity and ran with it, a bit further than I expected honestly. It was great fun to write for you, and I hope you enjoy! Many thanks to the lovely hp-kinkfest mods for the opportunity to post and tons of love to my betas sassy_cissa and noeon for making sure I didn't misspell the word "cock." Title courtesy of Ms. Kylie Minogue.

Many apologies for this perhaps being the filthiest thing I've ever written. /0\

Read it on AO3.

Comments

[gracerene]

SO EXCITED FOR THIS!

[femmequixotic]

I'M STILL SHOWERING BECAUSE I FEEL SO DIRTY. *g* Now I have to catch up with your lovely fic!

[digthewriter]

This was great. And naturally broke my heart a little. I knew something was up with the ..."I am going to wank for weeks...."

Thanks for writing. It's brilliant per usual.

[femmequixotic]

Awww. Thank you. And yes, it broke Draco's heart as well. (I might have started a series...)

PS Good sleuthing--that was EXACTLY what that line was supposed to hint at.

[digthewriter]

I'm eagerly waiting for the series, already tracking it on AO3. I can't tell how this fic has been haunting me all day.

I spent most of my morning today reading fic and this was my second one of the day. I've been thinking about it all damn day. It's fucking brilliant. And I really need that happy ending. LOL. But, take your time, of course.

I don't wanna be those needy people that's like "sequel please?" Just the idea that it's Drarry endgame (per your ao3 notes), I can sleep better tonight.

I hope you're well.

xo

[sassy-cissa.livejournal.com]

This is so fucking brilliant....I just can't even....

The dynamic is so perfect. I love cocky!Harry and soveryinlove!Draco. That said, my heart broke a bit for Draco at the end - but since I know there's more in the works I'll be fine. lolz

And while this might be the filthiest thing you've ever written, suffice it to say I will no longer believe you when you say "I can't write porn" - suck it up...buttercup. You write awesome porn!! ♥ ♥

[femmequixotic]

*twirls you* It would not even be anywhere near as awesome without you! Thank you so much for betaing when I just. couldn't. stop. writing. pr0n. and handed it to you at the last minute.

I guess I am going to have to stop using that excuse...♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[writcraft]

It's an odd thing to focus on perhaps amidst all the glorious smut, but I absolutely adored your descriptions of Draco running through London and the way you wove your knowledge of the magic in the series into the piece so deftly. The descriptions were so evocative, I felt as though I was there running through the streets with him. I loved the voyeurism and the way he saw Harry that first time and then couldn't shake him from his head. Pansy and Blaise were a delight!

Thank you for participating in the fest!

[ladyofsd.livejournal.com]

The detail of the story setup is lovely. It really sucks me in, making me want to learn more.

The scene with Draco watching Harry shower is Sooooo yummy! Ugh! When reading it, I think, No, Draco. Don’t run away. Make your move." :D

I can so sympathize with Draco, having a crush and doing silly things hoping to gain the person's attention.

Then the second shower scene has me panting, my voyeurism kink going yes, yeeeees. Sooooo Hot!

I love the darker undertones of how Draco’s attraction to Harry straddles the line between normal interest and obsession. And Draco knows it and feels self-loathing because of it.

Draco’s friendship with Pansy feels natural and real. I'm glad you gave Draco that. :)

But then poor Draco is taught all about the stealth charm. *evil cackle* And Harry shows some of his Slytherin traits. Looove. So much Loooooove. Harry, Draco’s superior, going down on Draco and the smut and the fucking. For fuck's sake, my mental facilities may have momentarily shut down.

The angsty ending! Ugh! *sobs* Thank goodness there will be a sequel. Bril story!

[kerrilee75.livejournal.com]

Omg I was not expecting that angst, but it was so delicious after that smutty smut. Like, holy shit that was sooooo hot!! Like ridiculous. This Harry is sexy as fuck, I can't even. Gah, I can't wait fir the sequel!

[theimpossiblegl.livejournal.com]

This was amazing, and with this you have made me ship these two! I love be glimpses inside Draco's mind, the relationship with him and his old Slytherin friends, and ... well ... fuck me, that was some awesome smut!! I'll take another serving when you have a second course!

[geneva2010.livejournal.com]

I have commented on this delicious, kinky fic at AOL. So delighted that you wrote for my prompt. There is no way for me to express it - made my week, month, year!!

Oh yeah, and I Can't Get the ELO version of "Can't Get It Out of My Head" out of My Head.

[carpemermaid.livejournal.com]

ASDhfjsdahflkdsahlfdsjahlfdsahkjfsda I'm still all fluttery and a happy puddle of goo over here! This is seriously stunning, I absolutely love Draco in this so much. His emotional vulnerability, his guilt over getting off on watching Harry, and his introspection on wanting to prove himself vs giving up and dragging his feet back to his parents, while also working damn hard to follow his new life mantra and prove what he needs to - to himself and to the Aurors, just guuuuhhh yes yes yes yes!!! I loved that at first he didn't even realize it was Harry, he was just struck by the attraction of a really fit body and then BAM Harry Potter. His conversation with Pansy and Blaise about it was really amusing, I loved the dynamic of their friendship and the lines about everyone fancying Harry at some point. I also loved his morning runs, and how he would pick up his pace to run away from the WWN lol - also genius concept, the modified Bubblehead Charm, I loved that! And then Harry, fuuuuuuuck, he's so utterly gorgeous and dishy and just UNF. God, any kind of wet Harry gets me going, but I was making dying whale sounds at this:

Naked. Lying on a bench, legs on either side, his towel beneath him, eyes closed. His glasses are on top of a pile of folded clothes, his dark hair's still damp and curling from the shower. His cock is soft, curled between his spread thighs.

*g* *melts*

And then good god the sex was scorching hot! The dirty talk had me all shivery and the command in Harry's voice that made Draco want to give up control and drop to his knees yes yes yes *nodding my head really fast* and god I loved how they were both blowing each other's minds - Harry with the dirty talk and Draco with the "Auror Potter" and the begging. The power imbalance, and Harry being his superior, pushed at least 45 of my buttons, I'm pretty sure I was drooling? It was maybe a tad pathetic of me, but omg it was so hot hahaha! I loved when Harry pulled him up in his lap and held him so he couldn't move hasdkflhasjkdfshajds. And then in the shower, I was making more incoherent screeching sounds of a dying animal because the desperation was so hot, and then the semi-public sex when the other Aurors were in the locker room. I loved Draco's panic about whether or not Harry was going to leave him like that.

And then oh, my heart, when Draco found out Harry wasn't even in the country anymore and wouldn't be coming to the Leaky <333 I just ached for him and wanted to hug him.

The other glimpses we get at the Aurors and Pansy and Blaise and Hermione as an Unspeakable were all fantastic, too. I loved the descriptions of the Centre, I could picture it all vividly in my mind. I also really loved the scene at the end where Draco was walking through the Leaky and noticed other trainees and recruits and Healers coming off their shifts. Pansy and her history with Anthony Goldstein was really fascinating, as was Pansy as a magi-forensic worker always toting around books at mealtimes and keeping jumpers because they're cosy.

And all I can think after finishing is that there's more to come and I am both ready with my seat belt buckled while also being !!!!!!!! because I know this is going to wreck me in the best way possible omg I'm so excited hahaha! <33333

OH, and also BRAVO on the filthiest thing you've ever written, because it's so glorious and I want to marry it!!!! :D

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

Oh my gosh, yes, what carpemermaid said above covers about everything I loved, so I don't know what to add.

Uggh, this was simply SO GOOD that I don't know what to say. One of my favorite things was definitely Draco running every morning. I'm not sure I can pinpoint why, but somehow it was just so serene and human. You know? I like the act of running, in theory. I'd be out doing it myself if I could. (I have a heart and lung condition, I'm not just lazy, lol.)

The places and the traffic, and the bubble charm. Gosh, I loved it all. Oh, and his apartment! I was practically rolling on my floor with happiness at the description of it. Walnut bookcases! *fondly looks at my own walnut furniture*

I really adored his friendship with Blaise and Pansy as well, and the backstory of how they all got into this field. You covered that nicely without letting exposition or a giant flashback take over the story. And I didn't only like the friendships, I liked them as characters, I should add.

Holy grapes, and the actual smut was insanely hot. I had to look up at my ceiling at one point and take a deep breath. God, the way they spoke to each other. And Draco's wonderful guilt. Poor thing. Shit, and then that ending. I am so psyched for more. Unfffff, it was so good!!

[fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com]

This was just so yum! And angsty. Sex and feels! Best combo...

[articcat621.livejournal.com]

This was so hot and dirty and sexy and ughhh the ending killed me. Well done <3